Wednesday Feedback Writing and Science

Writing.

Great work everyone - 53.1% recognised that the description was of picture A.

These children identified an example of Personification correctly:

Maisey M, Arsh, Nathan, Ibrahim W, Shahd, Aqib, Khadija, Faizan, Zahara, Fatima T

These children identified an example of a Metaphor correctly:

Nathan and Zahara

These children identified an example of a Simile correctly:

Nathan, Moeez, Zahara, Fatima T

Remember, if you have have completed the writing task send it to the class email address and we can share it on the blog.

Science

Great 90% said that the statement was False - All the planets in our solar system are not the same.

These children matched the planets correctly to their names in 10 tries or less:

Nathan, Khadija, Kashif, Noore, Zahara, Sadia

Fill in the Blanks these children got at least 12/14 correct

Nathan, Khadija, Noore, Zahara, Arsh

Here is a very detailed answer from Zahara, using all the vocabulary to support her answer - Well done Zahara

In my opinion, this statement is false. There are 8 planets in our solar system. The biggest planet is Jupiter and the smallest planet is Mercury. Atmospheres differ on the planets in the solar system there are two types, gas planets and rocky planets which is divided into two groups. Mercury, Venus, Earth and Mars are known as the rocky planets. Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus and Neptune are the gas planets. A year on Earth lasts 365 days. A year on Mars lasts 687 days. The planet closest to the Sun is Mercury and the planet furthest from the Sun is Neptune. Saturn has the most moons, with 87. Mercury and Venus are the only planets in the solar system without any moons. The temperature on each planet is not all the same some are hot some are cold excepting Earth which is just a right amount of hot and cold with life to support living creatures and humans to live on.                                                 

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Another great days work children. 

Ms Carney